Same people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it
Advertising has been a significant force in shopping consumer behaviour for over a centery. However there are differing views on the effectiveness of advertising in the modern world. Same people agree that advertising has become so ubiquitous that it has lost its
Impact,while others claim that advertising remains a powerful force that can significantly influence consumers purchasing decisous, for example if they advertis too much people will ingore them. This means that the advertisement will be ignored, so it is useless to advertise the company.
That is why i recommend online advertising because all people and children use online commerical for example on the one hand, critics of advertising argue that people have become increasingly adept at ingoring ads in today world,advertisements are present every where, from website IT sistem and other sistems. But if you advertise online, people from all over the world well see it,and it will get better results at the same time,the number of online magazine will grow. Another commerical is that they can see and choose they need. Now a days all peoples makes money from online advert.
In conclusion this days cammerical need for all people, because make a maney so comfortable this online shopping i agree with this choose .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... consumer behaviour for over a centery. However there are differing views on the effect...
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Suggestion:
...ecome so ubiquitous that it has lost its Impact,while others claim that advertisi...
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Suggestion: , while
...iquitous that it has lost its Impact,while others claim that advertising remains a...
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Suggestion: many
...isous, for example if they advertis too much people will ingore them. This means tha...
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...t is useless to advertise the company. That is why i recommend online advertisi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o advertise the company. That is why i recommend online advertising because al...
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Suggestion: , advertisements
...gly adept at ingoring ads in today world,advertisements are present every where, from website I...
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... today world,advertisements are present every where, from website IT sistem and other siste...
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Suggestion: , and
...ople from all over the world well see it,and it will get better results at the same ...
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Suggestion: , the
...will get better results at the same time,the number of online magazine will grow. An...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...that they can see and choose they need. Now a days all peoples makes money from online adv...
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...oples makes money from online advert. In conclusion this days cammerical need ...
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Suggestion: these
...y from online advert. In conclusion this days cammerical need for all people, be...
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Suggestion: I
...ney so comfortable this online shopping i agree with this choose .
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Suggestion: .
...online shopping i agree with this choose .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24757281553 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96050535199 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.7729956503 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269500095398 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112668284172 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802357402635 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163051985946 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835894156952 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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