Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ADVERTISING IS EXTREMLY SUCCESSFUL AT PRESUADING USE TO BUY THINGS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT ADVERTISING IS SO COMMON THAT WE NI LINGER PAY ATTENTION TO IT.

In this expeditiously evolving world number of people think that advertising is important for business. so I amagreement that. businessmen should be pay more for expeditiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for them business.
Many doctors want to see a law banning all tobacco advertising. As marketing manager, his job is to oversee all the company’s advertising. So otherside important occupation workers sympathizer advertise, moreover nowadays much people earn money from the ones. Internet marketing is developing day by day, it is easier side for make money, furthermore regarding marketing is comfortable, easy and reduce of time
I am in broad agreement with these. On the other hand, advertisement might be lose its power, because peopleexposed commercials consistly and this caused ignoring any kind of sale tactics. For instance, if people see many commercials in an online streaming platform, they cancel their memberships because they find the commercial sirritating. This shows that maybe, marketing skills must be changed.
In conclusion, advertisement might divide the society whether it is related to the today's world. In my opinion, its success outweigh the people's attention to it. People might decide with their experiences.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: Used
...NG IS EXTREMLY SUCCESSFUL AT PRESUADING USE TO BUY THINGS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AT WE NI LINGER PAY ATTENTION TO IT. In this expeditiously evolving world num...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... advertising is important for business. so I amagreement that. businessmen should ...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Businessmen
...nt for business. so I amagreement that. businessmen should be pay more for expeditiously. F...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...n should be pay more for expeditiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for the...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...editiously. Furthermore It is seen bring the effective for them business. Many...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring the effective for them business. Many doctors want to see a law banning a...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ympathizer advertise, moreover nowadays much people earn money from the ones. Intern...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...maybe, marketing skills must be changed. In conclusion, advertisement might divid...
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Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...In my opinion, its success outweigh the peoples attention to it. People might decide wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56696428571 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4368592863 2.5805825403 133% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.540411800872 122% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6287523545 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1333333333 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353843520515 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118806896543 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158428995629 0.0662205650399 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233057589537 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256837958059 0.0443174109184 580% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments