School changes

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School changes

The maps illustrate the area of a school in 2004 and the possible future development 20 years later.

Generally speaking, the area of the school was limited to the northern part of the entire region, while which is anticipated to be wider and extend toward south with considerable changes in the campus in 2024.

Looking in to the detail, it is noticeable that a big road is forecasted to be constructed along the south border of campus and run directly toward east, linking the main entrance to a new parking lot located in the west border of school. Apart from that, the original sport field is planned to be knocked down and replaced by a new school building. Also, the new sport field will be smaller and located south to the new parking lot. Moreover, the path between the “school building 1” and “school building 2” is expected to be shortened and a new bridge is forecasted to be built, linking the two buildings together. The woodland surrounding the school is predicted to remains largely the same in 2024.

Overall, the two maps render the enormous changes that are planned to happen 20 years later in a school in order to meet its increasing student population.

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while which is anticipated to be wider and extend toward south with considerable changes in the campus in 2024.
while it is anticipated to be wider and will be extended toward south with considerable changes in the campus in 2024.

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