Secondary and higher education
Given two charts provide recent percentage of secondary and higher students in several major
regions namely Europe, Sub-Saharan Arabic, Latin America and East Asia. At the first glance, it is
evident that Europe has the highest percentage of pupils studying in both secondary and higher
education among other countries.
Advancing development in secondary education illustrated in first chart, Europe’s number of student
has become significant with percentage of almost 100 percent of female student and 90 percent of
male student. Besides, student in other countries are populated under 50 percent of secondary
student, and Sub-Saharan Arabic region has the least percentage of student valued approximately 20
percent of female student and more or less 10 percent of male student.
Meanwhile, the second chart reveals the population of female and male student in universities
nowadays. Of various region, Europe has administered the highest percentage of higher student of
nearly 50 percent whilst a quite similar percentage of student is seen on the other countries.
As for the proportion of male and female student, women, in overall, outnumber men studying in
secondary education while men outnumber women in college school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Regions
... and higher students in several major regions namely Europe, Sub-Saharan Arabic, Lati...
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Suggestion: Education
...studying in both secondary and higher education among other countries. Advancing deve...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Male
...t of female student and 90 percent of male student. Besides, student in other coun...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Percent
...ge of student valued approximately 20 percent of female student and more or less 10 p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...male and male student in universities nowadays. Of various region, Europe has administ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nearly
...ghest percentage of higher student of nearly 50 percent whilst a quite similar perce...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondary
...in overall, outnumber men studying in secondary education while men outnumber women in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, while, as for, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76063829787 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85879390309 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9038838875 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.714285714 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21696165688 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12437530282 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976537622935 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959720699034 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106360993617 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 61.2550243902 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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