Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Some people think that men and women are generally different and for that reason they should be treated unlikely. Although there has been many movements regarding gender equality at workplace, I personally believe that there are some vacancies that are way much more appropriate for a specific gender.
To begin with, some see man as physically stronger and emotionally stable than woman. Meanwhile, woman is perceived to be more soft-hearted and caring. Because of that nature, it is scarce to see woman occupied in a construction field and, similarly, we rarely see man work as a playgroup teacher or baby sitter.
I think culture plays a significant role in defining which occupation are meant for male or female. Asian countries such as United Arab Emirates and Indonesia, for instance, position man over woman in social hierarchy. Perhaps, that is why most leaders in both nations are men. This phenomenon, however, is nowhere to find in western countries. We can easily find woman in leadership role, for example Margaret Thatcher who served as the prime minister of the United Kingdom for around 2 decades.
Admittedly, in recent years, some careers that was used to be associated with female are now commonly filled by male figure, such as chef, make up artist, and fashion designer. Likewise, woman work in technology industry is now more prevalent than it was in the earlier time.
All in all, despite the fact that many occupation which was dominated by certain gender can now be filled by both male and female, it seems to me that some particular jobs remain more proper for one gender over another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occupations'.
Suggestion: many occupations
...ime. All in all, despite the fact that many occupation which was dominated by certain gender c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99259259259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63274723904 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625925925926 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5213778474 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143926616439 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051559091146 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646718182378 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765560308869 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683170193478 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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