In this contemporary world, it is thought by a few individuals that it has been best option to accept worse situation as it is, without thinking much, while others advocate that improving the situation is the best way. Although I am tending towards later view, I will discuss both view points in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are myriad reasons behind the acceptance of worse situation. One of the most prominent reasons is that right from the childhood people heard many negative things from their parents and their relative related to the difficulties of life. These things make them to believe that it is impossible to change their situation and they have to suffer a lot in their life. Apart from that, many people may not have the courage to change the situation or do not want to take risk in their life. For example, in today's cut throat competition it is very difficult to find a job. If they leave their job in order to get the dream job, they might end up with losing the existing job.
On the other hand, I agree with those who argue in the favour of improvement. First and foremost, people must consider that humans have the ability to change the situation, unlike animals. One is responsible to write their own fate. So, why do not we wright our future interesting? Another point to consider is that life without improvement will become boring. Even people do not like to use old mobile phone and applications and they like updated version of their phones. Similarly, it is necessity of people to make the better version of themselves.
In conclusion, despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one's situation, I think it is better to improve our current situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the best'.
Suggestion: been the best
...hought by a few individuals that it has been best option to accept worse situation as it ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...elves. In conclusion, despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...elves. In conclusion, despite having the the fact that it is difficult to change one...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...the fact that it is difficult to change ones situation, I think it is better to impr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72757475083 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54830053347 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5272902901 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192063434766 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564418509699 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434927129564 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114095344169 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645439393512 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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