Some people believe that parents should limit their hours of watching TV and playing computer games for children, but instead encourage reading books. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that parents should set children's time and limit of watching television and playing games, meanwhile parents need to motivate them for reading books as well. In my perspective, excessive use of T.v and playing games could become more dangerous for children which can be affected to their health.
In today’s world, it can be seen that children has become so much engaged to playing games at every time which is completely wasting of time and energy, along with this, large number of children do dot prefer to play physical games which is beneficial for their health but, owing to trending of games and technology children has become more and more addicted of using gadgets items that creates diseases to some extent such as, getting obesity, eyesight problem, feeling laziness and many others that eventually is not good for underage people. Inclusive of this, many children has become enough engaged with games and they do not care about their nutrition’s and social lives that actually is the sign of the devastation.
Nowadays, number of parents do not care about their offenders as they need to do, however, mostly parents does not have enough time to look after their children due to work load for instance, difficult to uphold the responsibility with job, hard to concentrate on children at every time due to home and office responsibility and many others. In addition, one of the obvious issues of current parents is to also being engaged every time that directly creates negative impact on children's mind. Furthermore, parents are the back bone of every children life that plays imperative role in their lives, as well as, make their habits such as, writing, reading, working and many others.
In conclusion, In order to make better and healthy life of children is to parents need to focus on their daily lives, as well as motivate and move their tendency towards the education that ultimately will be worthwhile for their future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02727272727 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55421472391 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 283.868780488 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.096318209 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.375 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 5.23603664747 313% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293199901101 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143646267222 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683683084148 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197745802489 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738295120022 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.2329268293 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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