Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communication information. State which you consider to be the most effective;
1- Comics
2- Books
3- Radio
4- Television
5- Film
6- Theatre
In today’s fast pace technology, commonly it can be seen that world is moving swiftly towards the technology wherein people are being engaged with several gadgets as compare to past such as, television, Mobile, Laptop, tablets and many others that eventually is the best to connect with people as well as spreading information widely in least time. I however believe that books, television and movies still exist in different values. But, it has number of positive or negative consequences as well.
This paragraph will discuss about the advantages of recent electronic gadgets which is being used nowadays for various purpose for example, stay closed with friends and family via social media and video calls especially for those who lives far from home, easy to asses-sable any information from internet whether for office, assignment or personal development. Moreover, a recent survey by UK government categorized in percentage that almost half of the populations prefer to watch movies and 35% like television, although only 15% of the population still love to read books which is quite less as compare to last couple of decades.
On the flip side, using electronic items has plenty of adverse consequences that eventually is not far beneficial in case of being addicted or excessive usage for instance, using cell phones, laptops and television can effect on different body parts which becomes the reasons of many diseases namely; obesity, laziness, brain problem and etc. Lastly, many adepts assert that in spite of knowing the disadvantages people are doing deeply flawed with their health to be used needless.
To sum up, numerous studies have consistently found that gadgets plays most significant role in today’s world, although it has number of pitfalls as stated above. Hence, every single person is responsible to manage their lives accordingly and not to use anything excessively reason-less.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... love to read books which is quite less as compare to last couple of decades. ...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...amely; obesity, laziness, brain problem and etc. Lastly, many adepts assert that in spit...
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Line 13, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o use anything excessively reason-less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38283828383 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.763036619 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.308929835 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.222222222 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8888888889 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154463052781 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500300459438 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357757023561 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801433648601 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377424190296 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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