"Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time" What is your opinion?
To day, the system of education have many changes. The children spend more time for study at school rather than at home. They have less time to enjoy other activities beside studying, so I think that the children will not waste their time for their studying when they spend free time enjoy other activities that different educational activities.
The children deserve free time to rest after studying a lot in long hours at school. There are many activities that the children can rest after school.
They can play sports such as: tennis, volleyball, basketball etc, or sleep a few hours to improve their health, they can watch a film that they love, etc. Moreover, they can spend free time to learn something that they do not learn at school to improve some soft skill, such as: cooking skill, music skill, ect.These activities really are necessary for children to low their stress in studying at school.
To sum up, for the opinion I have mentioned above I believe that children have also more benefits they spend their free time in other activitíes beside education.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-25 | Kayden | 67 | view |
| 2020-09-23 | thub1808457@student.ctu.edu.vn | 73 | view |
| 2020-09-18 | nguyen0106. | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
To day, the system of education have man...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to free'
Suggestion: to free
...ional activities. The children deserve free time to rest after studying a lot in lo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the children can rest after school. They can play sports such as: tennis, vo...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...uch as: cooking skill, music skill, ect.These activities really are necessary for chi...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow their stress in studying at school. To sum up, for the opinion I have mentio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87431693989 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33499000581 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5453309099 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350866972515 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155324332112 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10821266637 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217935000596 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852456438596 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.