The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
The table compares how much time Someland citizens spending on separate leisure activities according to age in one year.
Overall, the young and the old tend to prefer watching TV and videos while middle-aged people are more interested in individual exercises. In addition, watching tv is the most preferred activity out of the 6 ways whereas the greatest difference can be seen for group exercise between teenagers and the 60s+ group.
In average, it takes people under 20 about 12000 and 100 hours to watch TV and go to the cinema, in turn. In contrast, both these activities are less popular for middle-aged people since the figures for them are hovering 500 and 25, respectively. While the two oldest brackets do not take any exercises at all, teenagers are keen on this kind of activity and spend 450 hours per year. This trend is relatively similar to socializing with 4 or more people, with 350 hours for teens and 25 hours for people over 60.
Individual exercises and socializing with less than 4 people are on pars in terms of gaining popularity to middle-aged people as they spend more than 200 hours on these activities, which is higher than those of the young and the old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81067961165 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60634408765 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4313955791 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199605381111 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880190993974 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539363346165 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116390716692 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676949347256 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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