the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
The given table illustrates the expenditure of persons on many items such as food, clothing, and leisure in five countries during 2002.
Overall, it is noticed the highest spending for Turkish people is on food. While the Spanish people spent the least expenditure on education.
The Irish people spent 28.91% for food, 6.43% for clothing, and 2.21% for education. Furthermore, the Italian nation spent 16.36% percent on food, which was approximately half of consumer expenditure for Spain. In addition, the Spanish persons spent 9%, and 3.2% on clothing, and leisure respectively. Moreover, the Swedish consume their money with 15.77% on food. Whereas 3.22% of their expenditure spent on education. Lastly, the Turkish spent the most of their spending was for education. To sum up, the people in five countries spent the most of their income on food. However, the least expenditure for people in the five countries spent for leisure or education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...spending for Turkish people is on food. While the Spanish people spent the least expe...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onsume their money with 15.77% on food. Whereas 3.22% of their expenditure spent on edu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, while, as for, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70038342409 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1773748481 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103436636171 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494132447998 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570465655131 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100273898293 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732071673759 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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