The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describe the data about underground railway systems in six different nations(London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles). The first underground railway was introduced in London while the latest railway development has been occurred in Los Angeles. Japan's Tokyo underground station remained the busiest underground station among these nations.

In 1863, London opened is underground railway connectivity with the longest route of 294 km and around 775 million passengers commute through this means yearly. Paris introduced their railway system in year 1900 and they have built the second largest route of 199 km and yearly 1191 people travel through this station. Much needed underground railway connecting came to Tokyo in year in year 1927 and they have constructed the 155 km railway route and 1927 million people travel using this railway route yearly. Moreover, this is the busiest railway route among all the nations.

Later in 1976, underground railway route of 126 km was created in Washington DC and yearly 144 million passenger travel through this route. The smallest railway route of 11 km was opened in Kyoto in 1981 and nearly 45 million citizens use this means of transport. Latest among the mentioned countries, Los Angeles underground station opened their 28 km railway route in 2001 and they have rush of 50 million passengers on yearly basis.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: describes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31674208145 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59464289276 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493212669683 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2308103796 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125896165459 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675731881493 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429624203877 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1044868818 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500975804853 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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