The table below gives information about the values of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
The table provides details about the revenue (measured in NZ dollars) from New Zealand's kiwi exportation to five different nations in three consecutive years 2010, 2011 and 2012.
Overall, Japan lied the top among five countries in kiwi importation from New Zealand in all the three mentioned years. Besides, while the earnings from exporting kiwi to Japan, Russia, China, and Mexico's had an upward trend, Saudi Arabia's showed the opposite pattern.
Started at $271 million in 2010, the value earned from kiwi exportation from Japan went up mildly to $287 million in 2011 and there was another slight growth to $325,3 million the following year. The same pattern applied for that of China that began at $74,9 million in 2010 to 84,8 million a year later and eventually, to $94 million in 2012. Both the New Zealand's revenue from exporting kiwis to Mexico and Russia rose considerably over the mentioned period where the amount earned from Mexico doubled to $2.4 million in 2011 and grew to $3.3 million in 2012 and the amount earned from Russia rocketed to $2,404,000 in 2012, which was about two and the half time that of 2010 ($968,000)
The earnings from exporting kiwi to Saudi Arabia, however, dropped incredibly from $29 million in 2010 to $106,000 in 2011. The amount continued to fall slightly to $82,000 the following year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86607142857 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3415167932 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.943035147 43.030603864 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.714285714 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322676558537 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158196470515 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112583694553 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227153784665 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782519066988 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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