The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Submitted by shayma on Thu, 01/23/2020 - 13:59

The statistics illustrates data on consumer expenditure in various nations namely(Ireland,Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey) in 2002.

Overall,it can be seen that Turkey was the most expenses of food,drink,tobacco and leisure and education,while leisure and education were the lowest expenditure by Spain.

Looking at the data in more detail it is clear that, in terms of food,drink,and tobacco, Turkey was by far the most expenses of these items, with exactly 32.41% followed by Ireland which spend 28.91% on the same category.The percentage of expenditure in food, drink and tobacco was approximately the same in both Italy and Sweden,about 16.36% and 15.77% respectively.

Turning to the remaining data, it is evident that Italy was the highest expenditure of clothing and footwear,whereas Sweden was the lowest.Ireland, Spain and Turkey had the same rate of expenditure in the same items.In terms of leisure and education, Spain and Ireland were the least usage of it,but Turkey was the most expenditure.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
...nditure in various nations namelyIreland,Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey in 2002. ...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...Sweden, and Turkey in 2002. Overall,it can be seen that Turkey was the most ex...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drink
...hat Turkey was the most expenses of food,drink,tobacco and leisure and education,while...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...,drink,tobacco and leisure and education,while leisure and education were the lowest e...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drink
...etail it is clear that, in terms of food,drink,and tobacco, Turkey was by far the most...
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Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...which spend 28.91% on the same category.The percentage of expenditure in food, drin...
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Line 9, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , about
...mately the same in both Italy and Sweden,about 16.36% and 15.77% respectively. Tu...
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Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...est expenditure of clothing and footwear,whereas Sweden was the lowest.Ireland, Spain an...
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Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ireland
... footwear,whereas Sweden was the lowest.Ireland, Spain and Turkey had the same rate of ...
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Line 13, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e rate of expenditure in the same items.In terms of leisure and education, Spain a...
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Line 13, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...n and Ireland were the least usage of it,but Turkey was the most expenditure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54487179487 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51026366803 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.504618122 43.030603864 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.25 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 22.9334400587 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0257664624606 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247479887857 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332892684981 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0247479887857 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332892684981 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.2329268293 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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