the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Essay topics:

the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

A glance at the table provided reveals the expenditure of customer on food, drinks,tobacco, clothing, footwear, education, and miscellaneous activities in five different regions. Which, name is Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in year of 2002.

Overall, it is interesting to note that Turkey was the most spending country among all five countries. Whereas, Sweden had the lowest percentage for consumer spending total with lowest in two categories i.e. food,drinks and tobacco as well as clothing and footwear.

In category of food, drinks and tobacco, consumer of Ireland spent approximetely 29 percent. While, Italy's customer spent around 17 percent money on this things. Spain and Sweden spent 18.60 percent and 15.77 percent respectively. Whereas, Turkey accounted for the highest spend at 32.14 percent.

In clothing and footwear, Italy stood at 1st place with 9 percent. While, Ireland,Spain and Turkey spent almost similar percentage. Which, was nearly 7 percent and Sweden spent 5.40 percent on this sector.

finally, for Leisure and education category, Turkey was again topped the chart with 4.35 percent. Both Italy and Sweden spent a little over 3 percent. Whereas, Ireland was at 2.21 percent with Spain cited as the least spending country with 1.98 percent.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tobacco
... expenditure of customer on food, drinks,tobacco, clothing, footwear, education, and mis...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drinks
... with lowest in two categories i.e. food,drinks and tobacco as well as clothing and foo...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Ireland spent approximetely 29 percent. While, Italys customer spent around 17 percen...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...stomer spent around 17 percent money on this things. Spain and Sweden spent 18.60 pe...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Spain
...1st place with 9 percent. While, Ireland,Spain and Turkey spent almost similar percent...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...n spent 5.40 percent on this sector. finally, for Leisure and education category, Tu...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48743718593 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73267052437 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0267049477 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10693791394 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391269461613 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486287896081 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717593036274 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601616178377 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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