The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Overall, it’s clear that the proportion of food, drinks and tobacco was largest in all five countries, while the number of leisure and education was smallest in ones.
Starting with food, drinks and tobacco, the largest number of it was in Turkey, at 32.14%, followed) by Ireland, at 28.91%. The percentage in Spain, Italy and Sweden was the smallest, at just above 15%.
Turning now to clothing and footwear, the largest number of it was in Italy, at 9.00%.The expenditure in Turkey, Spain and Ireland was similar, at roughly 6.5%. However, Sweden was(had) also the smallest percentage amount them.
In leisure and education, Turkey spent the most money, at 4.35%, while Spain the least, at 1.98%. Besides, the percentage of Sweden and Italy was nearly equal, at around 3.2%.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...est number of it was in Italy, at 9.00%.The expenditure in Turkey, Spain and Irelan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13103448276 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50539489246 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.730224271 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144580903912 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10426880603 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.264559348144 0.0843802449381 314% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108277702893 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187542482737 0.0819641961636 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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