The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from1971 to 2007.

Essay topics: The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from

1971 to 2007.

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A glance at the table provided compares the number of cars which are used regularly in British households between 1971 and 2007.

Overall, it is clear that households in Britain that own one car to be regularly used had by far the highest percentage in most periods. Also, homes that did not use any car had steadily plunged as time went by.

Focusing on the year 1971, starting at almost 10% percent, homes that drove two cars rose steadily reaching up to about 25% in 2007. In contrast, households that did not drive a car showed an opposite trend, in which it initially started at a mere 50% percent in 1971 and dropping gradually to a low of roughly 25%.

Looking at three or more cars, they began at approximately 2% and soared up gradually to just over 5% by the end of the period in question. Conversely, at a negligible 45%, one car household regular drivers remained stagnant throughout the whole period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stagnant throughout the whole period.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, look, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8282208589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58055508688 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8779831574 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235623921042 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11934822932 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879587805702 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15950937922 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084819811257 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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