The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007
The line graph illustrates the amount of acid rain emissions in UK from four different sectors over a 17-year period. At first glance, it is evident that the total amount of acid rain emissions dramatically declined from 1990 to 2007.
In 1990 the amount of acid rain emissions from electricity, gas and water supply sector was the highest, at 3.5 million tonnes. However, it dramatically decreased to only 0.5 million tonnes in 2007. Other industries sector produced around 2 million tonnes in 1991, which was the second highest. Nevertheless from 1993 to 2007 there was a gradual fall in acid rain emissions from other industries sector, at around 1.2 million tonnes.
The amount of acid rain emissions from transport and communication sector and domestic sector were not significant difference. Otherwise emissions from transport and communication sector fluctuated between 0.6 and 0.7 million tonnes, reaching approximately 0.7 million tonnes in 2007. While the amount of acid rain emissions from domestic sector slightly reduced to only 0.2 million tonnes in 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39053254438 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78281450705 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.399905033 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394574847195 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204595149188 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697725007166 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295401460318 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00651638161468 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.