Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer
It is true that these days hobbies and lifestyle have changed because of economic and technological development. However, I believe that people would rather want to do something they like in their spare time than imitate hobbies or style of other people.
Popular hobbies have significantly changed in recent years because people have more much money and many new products have invented. For example, the internet appeared, which brings some entertained tools to people. Many boys are not interested in playing sports, instead of this they spend much time on playing games in a computer and chatting with their friends. Adults also begin to read e-books instead of books and nespaper, which makes something become more convenient. Many people have changed their habits and hobbies bacause which them save money and time which is something they really like.
In addition, these trends carry many choices to everyone. They can do many things they like. For example, there are some people who do not really like reading books, thanks to technological developments they can watch films, play games or chat with their friends and all of those things they really love. Moreover, there are some hobbies such as going fishing, cooking, playing sports, which still exist. This meant many people still keep on their hobbies that are old, because they only like doing those things in their spare time.
All in all, I believe that people select something they like to do in their spare time and they do not really concern on overtaking common trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, for example, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09019607843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2973632145 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6846146915 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226878580805 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903338451378 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614571454685 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162814331567 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156021567174 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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