The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007

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The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The line graph illustrates the number of cars used by per household in Great Britain over a period of 36 years. Overall, it is evident that the percentage of households owning a car was the highest and the figure for households having more than two cars was the lowest from 1971 to 2007.

By 1971, around 45 percent of households possessing a car, whereas only approximately 2 percent of families having more than two cars. The proportion of hoseholds with a regular use of a car fluctuated between 43 and 46 percent throughout a 36-year period. The figure for families owning three or more slightly increase to about 7 percent in 2007.

The percentage of households without a car in 1991 was approximately a half compared to in 1971. This figure significantly declined to around 25 percent in 2007. In contrast, the percentage of two-cars families was just under 10 percent in 1971, but to 2007 it reached about 26 percent.

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Average: 9.7 (5 votes)

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...cars was the lowest from 1971 to 2007. By 1971, around 45 percent of households...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80745341615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83885587131 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9795799681 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289951152582 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131753111727 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648258160501 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211924914315 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726192170594 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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