The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and od women working in different occupations.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the average weekly salaries of men and od women working in different occupations.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

           The table compares the incomes of male and female workers employees in five distinct professions per week in 2015.
           At glance, men earned much more money compared to women in all kinds of work. Both men and women had the highest salaries for professionals.
           Looking at the table for more detail, the incomes of men and women were respectively $2000 and $1900, which no other jobs could reach while people got the smallest number of money in manual jobs for both genders with $1000 for men and $850 for women. The difference of the incomes among 3 remained jobs were approximately $1300 and $950 respectively for men and women.
           Another interesting thing is that the disparity between the incomes of men and women in each occupation was extremely large. The figures for these gaps were above $200 in all sorts of work and up to about $500 in technicians.
           To conclude, te earing tended to be different between male and female in some fields.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.67682926829 4.92477711251 136% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.5601056455 2.65546596893 435% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0998172252 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0411573403523 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471493516772 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410215144417 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352025208563 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210759728983 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.46 11.4140731707 188% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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