The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

The flow chart illustrates the process in which waste paper is recycled through various steps.
           Overall, it can be seen that this process includes six separate stages to turn the waste paper into the new one, beginning with the waste paper collection and ending with producing a vast amount of usable paper.
           Loong the figure for more details, the first stage of the process begins with collecting waste paper from distinct locations, namely public paper banks, businesses. Next, the collected paper is totally graded and then the unsuitable paper for recycling is removed from the process in the manual sorting step. After delivering the paper to a paper mill by the company’s means of transport, people would clean, pulp and take out other material such as staples which are left from the sorting step before. At that point, it continues with the removal of inks and glues in order to prepare for the last step, which is putting the paper into the machine for manufacturing the whole brand new paper ready for use.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68208092486 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.60395341832 2.54303337028 299% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624277456647 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9463032485 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.833333333 76.5299724578 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173219139579 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130796417681 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815983766907 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182834666459 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847820010775 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 8.37731958763 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 8.71597938144 187% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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