Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, people have had a tendency to go aboard for a better living with new opportunities. However, it is said that a number of social and practical problems are pointed out when people living in a country were they do not communicate with others by their mother tongue. From my perspectives, I totally agree that they will meet a plentiful of problems in both social and practical aspects when living overseas.
When it comes to social issues, a new foreign language, which is not people’s mother tongue, maybe a major barrier in the communication among their fellows, partners and every surrounding people. When they work as an office man, it is necessary to build up relationships with other colleagues. Not using foreign language well may lead to some unfortunate consequences and conflicts which exert a negative impact on their ties. This would make individuals feel unhappy and isolated in work. On top of that, they also have several issues in routine activities. For instance, it may be difficult for them to obtain a reasonable price for a product in a market without a bargain. Obviously, they should speak fluently the language which people tend to speak in that area.
In addition, there would be a vast number of troubles in practice which people are required to tackle. In some occupations, it would be rather dangerous when people have a slight misunderstanding. To take the doctor as an example, doctors should speak a foreign language fluently and understand accurately what patients say because just a little mistake in this process may lead to a worthless treatment and event deleterious effects. As for education, especially students at the university, they must read a huge number of materials to do experiments and other practical assignments. Therefore, they do not have good background knowledge in the language, they may misunderstand the concept in books which cause their fail in practice.
To recapitulate, people must deal with a variety of problems in both social and practical aspects of they choose to live overseas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in addition, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73590504451 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.70493409367 2.80592935109 239% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3116329012 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103759421883 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547848905511 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378055073 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088481408646 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050392570819 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.