Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is true that we will get some certain problems in life when we staying in another country where we don't speak the same language with local people. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
There are 2 main reasons why I believe that some troubles in life may be caused by the difference between languages when living oversea. Firstly, it is the limitation of communication. language is not only a tool which is used to express the emotion of humans but also a manner to connect. if language becomes our problem, in this case, we neither reveal our desires nor connect to other people. As a result, they fail to reach the grade in business as well as establishing relationships. For example, a chinese student study abroad in Vietnam but he is not good at Vietnamese. Surely, he can not handle the basic needs himself such as making friends, bargaining when he goes to market, not mention to majoring in school.
Secondly, these troubles mentioned above may lead to isolation feeling to some people. living in a different country and among foreigners, unique to people who are not open and well-adjusted, they feel unconfident and always think negatively about everything. it can get worse if they suffer high-pressure subjects or jobs required high intensity. Back to the example in the first paragraph about the chinese student abroad, he will get sick even fall into depression if the studying is too hard to follow with a lot of dissertations.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that living abroad with the difference between languages, we may get social problems and practical problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94223826715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82890169035 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2112853817 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17375359947 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517003169698 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501568375899 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11292084137 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448439358874 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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