The chart below show the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008.

Essay topics:

The chart below show the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008.

The line chart illustrates the proportion of difference in income according to gender in 5 different countries between 1978 to 2008.

Overall, there were general decreases in income gaps in france, japan, the us, and the uk while australia saw an increase over the period. The figure for japan was higher than those of the remaining nations during the researched period.

In 1978, the proportion of difference in income between men and women in japan was highest while the figure for australia was lowest, about 48% compared to 18%. The data on australia declined slightly from 1978 to 1998 then it increased rapidly to 23% in 2008. The figure for japan decreased dramatically to 41% in the year 2008.

In 1989, the percentage of difference gaps between genders in the us was 33%, followed by 29% of the uk and 19% of france. there were the same downward trends in these figures of all 3 nations over the researched period. In 2008, the data on the us, the uk, and france reached 28%,27%, and 17% respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...n income between men and women in japan was highest while the figure for australia was lowe...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ed by 29% of the uk and 19% of france. there were the same downward trends in these ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77840909091 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59469420482 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2885812505 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284233840588 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112302885206 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113906418818 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188529245293 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131151908813 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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