The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first pie chart illustrates the consumption of energy in 6 different purposes in one australian family on average while the second chart gives information on the amount of greenhouse gas produced by the given energy use.
Overall, the expenditure on energy in water heating and heating in an australian household on average are the largest proportions. However, the emission of greenhouse gas of water heating and other appliances account for the largest percentages.
The largest household energy used in a family on average in Australia in heating and water heating are 42% and 30% respectively. By contrast, the percentage of energy used in cooling is lowest, just only 2% of the total energy consumed. the remaining parts of energy, other appliances holds 15% whereas refrigeration and lighting contribute 7% and 4%, accordingly.
water heating and other appliances are the two main reasons for greenhouse gas emissions in an average australian household with 32% and 28%, respectively. The emission of greenhouse gas released by heating and refrigeration are similar, which account for 15% and 14%, accordingly. The proportion of greenhouse gas production in cooling is lowest, only 3 %, compared to 8% of its production in lighting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47448979592 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12426548352 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474489795918 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.252494569 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348859471068 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146706731753 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101068070107 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228759705688 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876029525944 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.