The table below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
The table gives information about imprisonment in the 1930-1980 year period among the five countries.
As regards, the first, in 1930 Canada had the most imprisonments with 120,000 people, while Great Britain had the least and increased gradually in the following years till the number reached nearly 85,000. Meanwhile, in Canada, the number of imprisonments fluctuated throughout the period. However, the number has decreased and in 1980, Canada did not have the most imprisonments anymore.
The USA and New Zealand had 100 thousand imprisonments in 1930, later the USA followed the opposite trend with Canada, they both fluctuated but in the USA the trend was upwards. So, in 1980 the USA had the most imprisonments with 140 thousand.
Imprisonments in Australia decreased from 70,000 to 50,000 then increased to 80,000 when it became the same number as New Zealand in 1970. However, in 1980 the number of imprisonments decreased in Australia to 50,000 again while New Zealand’s continued to increase slightly to 85,000.
The overall picture is that the number rose in Great Britain and the USA when it declined in New Zealand, Australia, and Canada.
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors agriculture manufacturing and business and financial services to the UK economy in the twentieth century Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and the comparisons whe 73
- The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries 67
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28494623656 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88154489114 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6912544894 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167222364845 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936505809512 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756346232218 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111659631833 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897136965314 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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