The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group

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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

Given is the table depicting the New Zealand citizens by age group over the years, commencing from 2011 to 2012.
It is perceptible that the number of population in age group over 65 and 40-64 leaped significantly over the period years while the opposite was true for the rest.
The age group over 65 swelled by a further 4 % from 573,946 in 2011 while those in age group from 40 to 64 nudged up only 0,6% in the last year from 1,331,907. The total number of population in all age group ramped up from 4,381,269 to 4,410,284, albeit the diminution of age group under 15 and 15-39.
The age group under 15 receded from 1,557,256 to 1,574,102. Likewise, the age group from 15 to 39 recorded a similar pattern with 0,2% from 1,577,256 in the first year.

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