The Table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

Essay topics:

The Table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table illustrates the information and prediction about the changes in population aged 65 and more among Canada, Germany and UK from 1988 to 2030 at 12 and 20 years interval.

Overall, regarding to the table it can be seen that Canada had dramatically changes with great difference in entire period. In 1988, Canada was on 16.32 %. But, pertaining to the forecasting there will be found great change in Canada till 2030 around 06 percent. While, Germany stands on 20.45 % in 1988 and found slightly change nearly 06 % in 2000 that will be reached nearly 31 % at the end of 2030.

The UK was found quite minimal change by 01 % from 1988 to 2000. Whereas, indicated by expectation, changes will be occur approximately 06 % till the end of 2030.

To conclude, great change was found in Canada between 1988 to 2000 and pertaining to forecasting population will grow more than last. While, Germany and UK had found marginally change throughout the period.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67668584426 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8436242322 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156220182475 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711135607809 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710446860162 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118019373664 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786618561306 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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