The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year befkre and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the resukt of surveys askong visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Essay topics: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year befkre and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the resukt of surveys askong visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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The table provides information about the yearly figure of Ashdown museum visitors earlier and after redecoration, while the diagrams illustrate the survey finding of visitor’s satisfaction during visiting the museum at the same time. Overall, there is an increase number of the total number of museum visitors after redevelopment and the share of people who satisfied with the share of people who dissatisfied with the museum decrease significantly after museum renovation.

In the first reported year, the museum had 74,000 of visitors a year and it increases more than 10% after the museum renovation.

The survey finding shows that a large number of people unsatisfied while visited the museum before redecoration, and it accounted for more than a third (40%). Following which saw satisfied and very satisfied visitors, accounted for 30% and 15% respectively. Just a few visitor who answered with very dissatisfied and no response, the former was 10% and the letter observed 5%.

The share of very satisfied visitors increase dramatically after the museum redecoration, and it accounts for more than 20% that of the previous year, followed by the satisfied visitors rising precisely a ten. The figure of dissatisfied visitors decreases dramatically to more than a four (from 40% to 15%), while both very dissatisfied and no respond share similar number 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ion. The survey finding shows that a large number of people unsatisfied while visited the mu...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun visitor seems to be countable; consider using: 'few visitors'.
Suggestion: few visitors
...ed for 30% and 15% respectively. Just a few visitor who answered with very dissatisfied and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99028895178 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483720930233 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9626088422 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.125 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328543980907 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151884337571 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840824106367 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211688758651 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716536401042 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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