The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The given table indicates the proportion of populace by age groups in a town who cycled in 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the percentage of female cycling was higher than that of male. Another key feature is that most of riders were in the age group of 0-9.
In 2011, the figure for female riders in 0-9 age group was 51.3%, compared with 50.3% in male. The proportion of female and male who cycled in 10-17 age group were 42.2% and 24.6% respectively.
Another trend was seen in three remaining groups of age. In age group of 18-39, while the figure for women was 17.1%, the proportion of men was just 9.7%. There was 12.3% of female in age group of 40-59 cycled, whereas the figure for male was 8.0%. However, the 60+ age group had much higher figure, with 18.5% for women and 13.2% for men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the riders') or simply say ''most riders''.
Suggestion: most of the riders; most riders
...at of male. Another key feature is that most of riders were in the age group of 0-9. In 2011,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41216216216 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07716154236 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.2916013583 43.030603864 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5555555556 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227958276528 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122002703166 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809801745241 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184843432868 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912352576822 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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