The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.

The table lists illustrate what four main reasons for attending the arts among the UK adults between two decades ago and present time. Unit measurement was in percentum.

A quick glance at the tabular chart is quite enough to make it clear that the majority of the individuals was went to arts events in order to see specific performer or artist. However, only negligible proportion was fascinating towards business deals.

In the analisation of the arts events attendance in United Kingdom from 20 years ago to today, desire to view particular performer or artist was the major reason to attend arts events and almost just under three fifths of the entire folks had visited to the arts functions for this aim.

In case of other three reasons, the attendance pattern was completely unique, accompanying children and work or business purposes were witnessed of climbing trend scince twenty years that are presented 15 and 5 per cent difference consecutively until current time period. In contrary, special occasion or celebration were touching ground continuously and approached nine per cent nowadays from nearly one third in two decades ago.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'art'.
Suggestion: art
...majority of the individuals was went to arts events in order to see specific perform...
^^^^
Line 7, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onsecutively until current time period. In contrary, special occasion or celebrati...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17741935484 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69098777264 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3372599112 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160310715995 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614647049642 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735064915205 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978618319636 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667880874715 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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