The diagram shows the process of the water treatment

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the process of the water treatment.

The diagram depicts how water can be filter and make it suitable to drink.

A quick glance at pictures is quite enough to make it clear that the water treatment procedure accomplish within ten steps initiate with intake of water from lake and end with take it through faucet.

First of all, in the water filteration process, water flows into pipes by attached pumps after passing through intake screens. fter that water enter into flash mix which is made with polyaluminum chloride and oxidants.This whole work comes under first three stages. In fourth and fifth steps water have to pass through flocculation and settling basin.

Moving further, as soon as step four and five are finished water need to face chlorine and filter membrane before disinfection process in which chlorine, lime or (sodium hydroxide) and flouride are essential elements. This procedure is completed eight stages of water treatment process. In last two stages water need to pump and reach to faucet for daily use.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fter
...s after passing through intake screens. fter that water enter into flash mix which i...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...with polyaluminum chloride and oxidants.This whole work comes under first three stag...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hrough flocculation and settling basin. Moving further, as soon as step four and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40552451362 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7024622389 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319317767105 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141580517117 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805061972581 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178216193001 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332739315305 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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