The diagram below shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station.

The diagram depicts how electricity can be produce with the aid of two various sorts of hydroelectric power station.

A quick glance at pictures is quite enough to make it clear that the production of electricity is accomplish within five stages under both the hydroelectric plants which intiate with intake of water from river and end with dropping of remaining water into river.

First of all, in traditional hydroelectric plant water enter into intake screen and flow towards turbine that is setup in the way of this flowing water. Due to high pace of water turbine starts circulating in anticlockwise direction and generates power. This entire work is finished first three segments of electricity making process trough traditional hydroelectic plant. However, in modern hydroelectric power station water comes into new channel and flow in pipe which rotates the blades of turbine in order to turn it into generator. this generator prepares power that is connected to transmission lines and conduct electricity. At last, remaining water returns into the river. The conducting of electricity and flow back of water are last two stages of electricity generating procedure with modern hydroelectric power station that are analogous for traditional one.

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Average: 7.4 (15 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplished
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is set up'?
Suggestion: is set up
...ke screen and flow towards turbine that is setup in the way of this flowing water. Due t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ine in order to turn it into generator. this generator prepares power that is connec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3807106599 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9244570734 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7953134943 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278342342982 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123770062582 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952309653731 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200917382203 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903443282479 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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