The diagram shows the process by which electricity is generated in two types of hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram shows the process on how electricity is being generated in two different kind of hydroelectric power station. Overall, the process consists of turbines, generators, a pipe, and also the transmission line.
There has been several significant changes in the traditional and modern hydroelectric power. In the past, it only consisted of 3 steps and there was no water flowing downhill built next to the turbines. Development has been implied to the machine, so, the process will be more effective. To begin with, the water, which flows from the the river, are being diverted, some go to a new channel and some remain to flow along the river. After that, the water will go through a pipe that connect to the turbines and will activate the turbine blades. Because of it, the turbines start to turn constantly and consequently also turn the generator, which is the connector between the turbines and transmission lines.
Electricity are made from the previous steps and it will be conducted through the transmission lines. After the water has already been used for turning on the blades, the used water will be released and exit from the turbines and flows back to the river. This diagram is a continuation flow because there will always have water running from the river and being used for the machine to produce electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...begin with, the water, which flows from the the river, are being diverted, some go to a...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...begin with, the water, which flows from the the river, are being diverted, some go to a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97767857143 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70766565226 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0802955923 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132318197911 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673089281443 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120529181273 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141347826056 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138305359306 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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