the table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in official building on a typical weekday
the table illustrates the coffee shop on a typical weekday in four times around 07:30 PM to 08:30 AM.overall, it is clear that the coffee in shop most popular than tea on a weekday, especially for breakfast and dinner. On the other hand, pastries was higher than sandwich,but sandwich is only poplar in the afternoon.
it is evident coffee was the best order in the morning which is 265 customers on average has at least 150 more higher than tea, and pastries was 275 in the morning more than quarter from sandwich. 10:30 to 02:30 is also ahead in customers value, with 185 order coffee and 200 sandwich.
On the afternoon, however, coffee as drink are almost equal value with pastries as food higher than tea and sandwich. meanwhile, in the evening coffee was 200, almost half than tea which is only 75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the table illustrates the coffee shop on a ...
^^^
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... hand, pastries was higher than sandwich,but sandwich is only poplar in the afternoo...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dwich is only poplar in the afternoon. it is evident coffee was the best order ...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ch is only poplar in the afternoon. it is evident coffee was the best order in...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sandwich' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sandwiches'.
Suggestion: sandwiches
...rs value, with 185 order coffee and 200 sandwich. On the afternoon, however, coffee a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...s as food higher than tea and sandwich. meanwhile, in the evening coffee was 200, almost ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sandwich' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sandwiches'.
Suggestion: sandwiches
...most half than tea which is only 75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6821192053 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39442212512 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0600539022 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124677736513 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665264120125 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863459775571 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976145118308 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770014862208 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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