governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, more and more people trusted that is better to spend a lot of money on railways. Whilst, some people are of the opinion that the governments should establish road infrastructure. I totally agree with people who trust that make better railways is a choice for the majority of people. we will examine both views of these points.
it is certainly true that the train can be used for many classes in societies because trains is a good choice for minimalized congestion in the city. Take Japan for the main instance, it proved in Japan that railways as the public facilities to commute more easier and more efficient and effective, it gives an impact for decreasing the traffic jams, and transportation accident. to conclude, trains as a public transportation gives significant advantages for many sides of the citizen, lead an individual and society be more conducive.
however, there are any several reasons that road gives some new sides of infrastructure trend. as far as we know, firstly, streets in the many regions are the central interactions of the people. for example, Malaysia had a city design which depends on the streets, such as business on the street like the open market, streets shops, and many more. secondly, it is easier for people to have good access in the streets because they have a business to travel personally with a private vehicle. the last, establish a facility to the streets is make many elements of people who traveled across the streets, especially pedestrian will feel more comfortable. finally, it is important to know that public infrastructure give many points of views, but in the majority of place, it is more productive for the people.
from where I can stand, I believe trains will give rapidly changes to people to become more productive to work and more confidence rather than commute across the streets which so extremely risky.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94637223975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7500107429 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511041009464 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3760692159 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0628234554708 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026064966449 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364977625931 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498448292312 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490092325618 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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