Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Efficient and modern infrastructure is the need of the fast moving world. While some people believe that investment in railway infrastructure is much needed than spending on road construction, I believe that developments in both sectors are equally important.
Roads and trains are the backbone of the economy of a nation. A wide and well-constructed road cuts the transportation time of a commercial truck by a big margin as compare to the time required on narrow roads for same mode of travel. For instance, the highway construction in India has been increased by 50% in comparison to last 5 years' road building activity, which results in a drastic reduction in travel time and fuel consumption, and it is directly impacting the cost of commodities being transported. This is one of the main reasons why the price of domestic consumables has not increased in India for last 5 years.
Interestingly, train is extremely useful in mass transportation. For example, coals from mines, crude oil from petroleum fields can be transferred to the processing factories in a cost effective manner if trains are used as a mode of communication, while passengers can also reach destination more quickly. Moreover, trains are more effective in carbon footprint reduction because most of the trains are running on electricity and a single locomotive can perform the same job of ten trucks or buses.
I believe that both modes, roads and rails, have their own advantages. The train is highly effective in case of large transportation, while well-constructed roads are super efficient, especially, where locomotive connection is not feasible, such as hilly areas. Thus, investment in both sectors is highly required for a prosperous country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26618705036 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26785049391 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.942492466 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643824357297 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233761844275 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255800921942 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0375445257195 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00947038788937 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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