The table shows the data of lunch and dinner at a small restaurant in a downtown business district from 7th to 13th October. According to the data, the earning of dinner is much more than the earning of lunch.
The amount of lunch sales is around $2500 on weekdays. However, the amount dropped to $1950 on Saturday, and reached to $1550 on Sunday.
The dinner sales is approximately $3500 except on Friday and on weekend. On Friday night, the sales reached the peak to $4350. Unfortunately, the sales declined to $2900 on Saturday, and only got $2450 on Sunday night.
In conclusion, during the week from 7th until 13th October, the restaurant earned money from lunch and dinner sales on weekdays is bigger than on weekend.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 589.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6746031746 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52596743127 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1207544449 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.625 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148602360091 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669784128773 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918305950886 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840595437882 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629509431492 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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