The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994 according to United Nations statistics

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

The given table graph gives information about social and economic indicators for given four mentioned countries namely Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in year 1994.

Overall, it can be clearly seen from given information, the figures for all four countries indicators were consistently higher in Canada and Japan. In addition, Zaire had the lowest figures for all indicators.

Annual income per person in japan was highest $15,760, and second highest amount was in Canada $11100. There was dramatic gap then in Peru and Zaire, where the annual income per person was $160 and $130 respectively. In the terms of life expectancy at birth , it was similar in japan 78 years and Canada 76 years, But it was lowest years in Peru 51years and Zaire 47 years.

Canada heated for daily calorie supply per person 3326, it compared with japan 2846 calories. Peru and Zaire has similar calories , it was 1927 and 1749 respectively. Whereas the adult literacy rate was almost 100% in Canada and Japan, only 68% in Peru and lowest % in Zaire had 34%.

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Average: 6.7 (10 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: was the lowest
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'in addition']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.105 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085 0.0759168565197 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0366838410393 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0131127313244 191% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.155750635184 80% => OK
Participles: 0.025 0.0379272487307 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40741317123 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.04 0.0948980150116 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.005 0.00437022459523 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.005 0.00967000014798 52% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1037.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82584269663 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342696629213 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.174157303371 0.247514529752 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112359550562 0.171178102325 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0786516853933 0.112407865282 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40741317123 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 49.9302969099 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7777777778 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1492728986 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 135.714022679 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 37.1935081149 47.7609492067 78% => OK
Elegance: 2.64705882353 2.94281807926 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272820643688 0.418131533498 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.200083711515 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113654833716 0.0850326197045 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.699984640472 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156919849919 0.157042692854 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145345991699 0.228904883108 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936684505413 0.108899403657 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354678127874 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121416020471 0.0812612215331 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219971590186 0.316326947829 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947153802187 0.0921553760075 103% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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