The table gives information about students studying six different subjects in an australia university in 2009
% female first language not english born outside australia
english 67% 18% 11%
modern languages 63% 61% 47%
history 58% 10% 12%
math 47% 48% 38%
physics 46% 47% 37%
chemistry 43% 42% 35%
The assigned tabular chat compares the proportion of different background student enrolled in six different subjects in an Australia university in 2009.
It's clear that female student prefer general subjects (english, modern languages, history) than core subjects (math, physics, chemistry). while non native english speaker consititude the main proportion of modern languages subjcet. By contrast, non native englisg speaker accounted for lowest percentage in history subjects. Meantime, students born outside australia who enrolled in core subjects have a familar percentage.
In 2009, female accounted for the main proportion of percentage in english subject, with the figure of 67%, followed by 63% percentage in studying moder language, and which is moderately higher than students enrolled in history, approximately 58%. however, the figures shows non native english speaker only made up under 20% in general subjects. Except for modern language, which provided 61% of whole students. Female students had a familar trend in studying different core subjects as well as non native engligh speaker, with the range of 40% to 50%.
Whatelse, students born outside australia appears an familar trend in studying general and core subjects compared with student whose first language not english. The figures shows nearly half of born outside student enrolled in modern language subject. By contast, only 11% enrolled in english and 12% enrolled in history in the same period. meanwhile, born outside australia student enrrolled core subjects were in the same level. To be species, 38% in math, 37% in physics and 35% in chemistry.
Comments
use 'a famillar' rather 'an…
use 'a famillar' rather 'an familar' will suit most situations.
'with a figure of 63% percentage' rather not 'with the figure of 63%'.
accounted for 'majority proportion' in the english subject.
'a percentage of 63%' rahter not '63% percentage'.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, well, while, except for, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58870967742 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64696781348 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7508048605 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346558848531 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128485128255 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672322107845 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227695859345 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630119347853 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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