The table shows data about the proportion of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002

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The table shows data about the proportion of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002.

The table shows data about the proportion of consumer expenditure on different items in five countries in 2002. Overall, the percentage of food, drinks and tobacco was the highest while that of leisure and education was the lowest among the three items in all given countries.
The proportions of money spent on food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey and Ireland were the highest, at 32.14% and 28.91% respectively. The figures for Italy, Spain and Sweden were the lowest and nearly equal, ranging from 15.77% to 18.80%.
Italy spent the most proportion of money on clothing and footwear, with 9%. whereas the bottom of the list was Sweden, with 5.4%. Meanwhile, those of Ireland, Spain, and Turkey were similar, at approximately 6%.
In terms of leisure and education, ranked in the first place was Turkey, with 4.35%. The proportions of consumer expenditure on that item in Spain and Ireland were the lowest, at roughly 2%. At the same time, the figures for Italy and Sweden were slightly higher and nearly the same, at around 3%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...oney on clothing and footwear, with 9%. whereas the bottom of the list was Sweden, with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, whereas, while, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94252873563 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47300126078 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6789487684 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256346512689 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135192935508 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.295591619314 0.0843802449381 350% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168189588531 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203881253985 0.0819641961636 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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