The table shows the maximum, minimum, and average monthly salaries in a European country in five employment sector in 2009,
The table compares the amount of salaries paid by five major career sector per month in a European country in 2009.
It is clear from the given table that Finance sector was considerably higher than others in terms of maximum, minimum and average monthly salary. While construction minimum salary was by far smallest, maximum and average wages of Hotels sector were smallest compared to four other sector in the year surveyed.
Finance field paid 7450 Euros to staff monthly to the maximum, which was the highest number of five sector, followed by trnasport, which paid 5480 Euros to the maximum. Hotels sector, in contrast, paid only less than a third of that salary of finance.The smallest amount of salary was also largest in finance field, where 1334 Euros were paid every month, whilst other sector's wages ranged from 817 Euros of construction sector to over 960 Euros of manufacturing field.
Average salary of finance was also by far highest in the same year surveyed, with 2560 Euros monthly, while the lowest amount of average salary fell to Hotels sector, with just over 1250 Euros.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...t of salaries paid by five major career sector per month in a European country in 2009...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...or were smallest compared to four other sector in the year surveyed. Finance field ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...m, which was the highest number of five sector, followed by trnasport, which paid 5480...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... than a third of that salary of finance.The smallest amount of salary was also larg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29476576266 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3799813483 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360792421233 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217332068123 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103054469117 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256859573316 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11442573404 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.