The table shows the number of employees and factories in the UK from 1851 to 1901.

Essay topics:

The table shows the number of employees and factories in the UK from 1851 to 1901.

The table illustrates how many employees and factories were reported in the UK over a period of 50 years starting from 1851.

In general, it can be seen that while the number of total employment decreased, the opposite was true that for factory. Besides, the figure for total employment was the highest in 1851 although this year witnessed the smallest number of factory.

To begin with, there was a sharp decline in the number of total employment from 470000 in 1851 to 61000 in 1901. The figure for male was higher than that for female employment from 1851 to 1891 except 1861, in which the numbers of male and female were 130000 and 160000 respectively. In 1901, 31000 was the number of male employment, which was nearly equal with that of female.

Moving on, with regard the remaining category, there was 225 factories in 1851. In next 10 years, the number of factory climbed rapidly to reach the peak of 727 in 1861. Then this number fluctuated slightly before experiencing a gradual decrease to 600 in 1901.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, then, while, in general, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81355932203 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44753431183 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1236376572 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340148357316 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140798386976 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844940758073 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207698069701 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907909900116 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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