The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved

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The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years. The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved the most popular in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.

The table illustrates the total revenue from complementary medicine in three years, in addition to that, it also shows the proportion of US hospitals, which use the medicine over twenty five years, then, classified by its popularity in 2012. Overall, throughout 2011 until 2016, the revenue kept raising and complementary medicine gave 14.3 billion US dollars as 2016 revenue, which known as the highest amount.

In 1985, only around 2% of hospitals used complementary medicine. The percentage measurement increased steadly until 2000, with more than 10% of hospitals. Then, the percentage rose rapidly to exactly 30% in 2005. Extreme raise of percentage kept continue after 5 years, make it the year with highest amount of hospitals, which was 40%.

Then, the medicine was being classified into 9 different types. Among all of those, natural products were the most popular one with nearly 18%, followed with deep breathing and yoga, which had similar measurement ( just above 10% and exactly 10% respectively ). Chiropractic, meditation, and massage came in between of the most popular and least one. Lastly, the remaining types are the least common medicines ( special diets, homeopathy, and guided imagery ), with all of it, had less than 3%.

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Average: 8.5 (16 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31472081218 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75486901693 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3717104352 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283862033418 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091771156866 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102675035099 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178063121755 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118514885317 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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