Two tables show the differenty about the tmeperatures and daylight hours between London and Sydney in the same days.
overall, the temperatures in this three days in London were lower than that in Sydney, the sunrise hour in Sydney was earlier than that in London. However, the sunset hour in Sydney was later than that in London.
Looking at the two tables, we can see that the max temperature in these three days in London was under 15 degree C, while that in Sydney was always over 25 degree C. the min temperature in London was from 3 to 5 degree C, while 17 degree C was the min temperature in Sydney.
The fact that, the hour sunrise in London was earliest at 08:05 and latest at 08:06 the hour sunset in this city was earliest at 15:57 and latest at 19:57, while the earliest hour sunrise in Sydney was 05:45 and the latest hour sunset was 05:45, these hour sunset in this city were 20:06 and 20:07.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout the tmeperatures and daylight hours between London and Sydney in the same da...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...en London and Sydney in the same days. overall, the temperatures in this three days in...
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Message: Did you mean 'this hour' or 'these hours'?
Suggestion: this hour; these hours
...5 and the latest hour sunset was 05:45, these hour sunset in this city were 20:06 and 20:0...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16797448755 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434523809524 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2835057992 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153627666368 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114365042908 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576884162806 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129445115387 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645001731843 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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