The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2007.

Essay topics:

The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2007.

The given tables illustrate the figures for the temperatures and daylight time measured in Mumbai and Moscow in the similar week in May 2007.

It can be seen that the temperature in Mumbai was higher than that in Moscow while the daylight time in Mumbai was longer than that in Moscow in the researched week in May 2007.

Looking at the information in more detail, regarding the temperature of both countries, India experienced a higher peak temperature than Russia on the average weekends, which were 33 and 10 degrees Celsius, respectively. Also, the lowest temperature in Mumbai was 29 degrees, compared to about 2 degrees in Moscow. The most striking point is that the temperature amplitude in India did not fluctuate as widely as that in Russia (average 4% and 7%, correspondingly).

As illustrated, in terms of the sunshine duration, 6 o’clock was recorded of the sunrise in India which began sooner than Russia (about 4 o’clock). Furthermore, the sunset in India also occurred sooner than the other nation (around 7 pm and 10 pm, respectively). All in all, the residents in Moscow might enjoy longer sunlight with 13 hours than those in Mumbai with roughly 18 hours.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, may, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02525252525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93717591348 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3109819624 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171936685746 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791835779338 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877794566741 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134881942483 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945529594967 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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