The tables show the average salaries of graduates and non-graduates in the UK in 2010.
The two tables compare the average amount of graduates and non-graduates in the UK received in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the average salaries of graduates were much higher than those of non-graduates. Moreover, while people who had the highest wage of graduates sector were over 50 years old, those at another were at their early 30s and 40s.
As can be seen from the table, the average salaries of graduates were $ 54 000 in comparison with only approximately $30 000 of non-graduates which was nearly two times less than the former.
Looking at the chart in more detail, the amount of money graduates at 22 could earn was $24 000 which was the least among five age groups while the maximum one was given to people who were at their early 50s with nearly $35 000. Meanwhile, the minimum salary non-graduates received was $14 300, which was for those at the youngest group. Besides, the highest wage for people who are still studying was about $19 000, which was much lower than the figure for those who have finished their courses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$54'.
Suggestion: $54
... the average salaries of graduates were $ 54 000 in comparison with only approximate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, moreover, so, still, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65027322404 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49213673589 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7026128206 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303829618985 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20635721546 0.103423049105 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192304572249 0.0843802449381 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284742872576 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196127166175 0.0819641961636 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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