In today’s world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the proliferation of modern technology, science is always a topic of interest. It is argued that private companies have a tendency of investing in the conduction of scientific studies rather than government and local authority. In spite of some advantages this trend can bring, the drawbacks of abusing power and money far outweigh its benefits.
On the one hand, scientific research can be provided with more adequate facilities by private companies than government. Evidently, they are ready to spend an enormous amount of money studying scientific topics which are believed to benefit them. For example, a billion-dollar company in Japan has invested a great deal of money to study the possibility of taking human beings to the Moon to live and this research has received a full glare of publicity and has been advocated by millions of people owing to its moral aim.
On the other hand, these companies possibly become the dangers for both the world and its citizens. That is because to make a huge profit as well as to guarantee the prosperity of companies, leaders will spare no effort and money to make an exclusive breakthrough at all cost. In fact, nowadays, there are colossal factories manufacturing low-quality commodities with toxic chemicals based on their previous research and selling them at much more reasonable prices to compete with other companies. The result of this is that not only the consumers but the whole community will also be affected detrimentally.
In conclusion, despite some advantages of making revolution in terms of researching scientific domains, there are numerous dire repercussions of these studies conducted by private companies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97167196864 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8976337115 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190013810233 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707039781492 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691522651605 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118395284358 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436885229506 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.