In today’s world, it’s private companies rather than government to pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?
In this day and age, many people claim that it is becoming increasingly for private companies to invest money in scientific research. although there are some negative aspects of this decision, there are several compelling reasons why this is an overall desirable trend.
On the one hand, this trend can be disadvantageous in several ways. The main shortcoming is that the national authority loses control in scientific research. this can lead to much scientific research that is performed disorderly and non-safe. As a result, this can make several negative consequences such as the low result reliability or the appearance of new various diseases.
On the other hand, it seems to me that this trend should be taken popularity because of numerous undeniable benefits. Firstly, it is an apparent fact that the investment of companies provides researchers with opportunities such as money and equipment to carry out research. this makes it easier for researchers to detect new solutions that people can use to deal with different problems in real life. this most salient example of this is that seed companies find out new cultivar tomato that can adapt to the drought stress conditions. Another advantage could be that the government can use the national budget to invest in some different problems in lieu of scientific research including traffic, schools, hospitals, and so on. this plays an important role in the comprehensive development of a nation and that is one of the expressions of a developing country.
In conclusion, there are some minus points for the investment of companies in science, although I am of the opinion that its advantages would be more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21323529412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96680014733 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0109079042 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17069331289 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669204717379 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055792139592 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105162753329 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271108018692 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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